Tuesday, October 23, 2007

TORTOISES BY VICTORIA BOBIS



Victoria Bobis




THE TORTOISE OF EARTH & THE TURTLE OF WATER




The tortoises are big animals and they have a long life. The tortoises are one of the most endangered animals in the world. There are two kind of tortoises: the tortoise of earth and the turtle of water.


The tortoises have four paw, one small tail, they haven't any bones but they have a caparison.


The tortoise of earth is very slow and it eats vegetables. They are endangered, because they need food, and they haven't food because the plants are very polluted.


The turtle of water swimming in the sea are endangerd because the people kill them, and the sea is very polluted because the people throw garbage in it.


When they are in danger, they hide in their caparison. The caparison is very strong and resistent. Thanks of this, the predators can't eat it.


The tortoise is a very nice animal and we have to help them, because they can't survive long!

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1 comment:

clara muller said...

LORENA BALSA

Your text about the turtles I liked , because to say things that don't call in the mine, which are very interesting.
I also has qualified turtles land and water, but you have your extended over your photos also have liked me.
I see no error in your text.